Monday, November 18, 2019

stormy music


lightning bolts
illuminate the sky
thunder cracks
across the ground
raindrops pound
against windows

under darkness
it is this music
that lulls me
to a deep slumber
into dreams that
seem endless

the only thing
better is holding
your hand as
the storm sings

- Written for dVerse Quadrille #92: Take a crack at poeming and Poetic Aside Nov 2019 PAD Chapbook Challenge: Day 18

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13 comments:

  1. tonispencerNovember 18, 2019 at 6:58 PM

    Sweet! The sound of rain is very soothing. I love to snuggle next to my husband during the rain so I can totally relate to this.

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  2. De JacksonNovember 18, 2019 at 7:15 PM

    Nice prompt mashup! :) I LOVE a storm that sings!

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  3. robkistnerNovember 18, 2019 at 8:26 PM

    Wonderfully engaging with a nice romantic twist. Enjoyed this Arcadia.

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  4. Both of us can't look good ... its either me or the houseNovember 18, 2019 at 9:19 PM

    May you always have that hand to hold. "it is this music
    that lulls me". lovely lines

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  5. SilverGardeniaNovember 18, 2019 at 9:21 PM

    I could hear the music of the storm in this!

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  6. Gillena CoxNovember 18, 2019 at 9:55 PM

    Nice romantic plug. Happy Monday

    Much✏love

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  7. GraceNovember 18, 2019 at 10:24 PM

    Sweet contrasting with the stormy music.

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  8. Frank HubenyNovember 18, 2019 at 11:24 PM

    I like your description of the storm singing one to sleep and dreams.

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  9. A Reading WriterNovember 19, 2019 at 12:49 AM

    i felt the song. i heard the storm. so good.

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  10. Kim M. RussellNovember 19, 2019 at 4:39 AM

    I love the sweetness in these lines:
    'the only thing
    better is holding
    your hand as
    the storm sings'.

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  11. indybevNovember 19, 2019 at 12:10 PM

    I love a good Midwest thunderstorm and the crack of thunder -- so long as it's not too close! But the sounds of storm shared … now there's a special moment!

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  12. Arcadia MariaNovember 20, 2019 at 8:05 AM

    Thank you everyone :)

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  13. brudbergNovember 20, 2019 at 4:00 PM

    How wonderful to have someone close.

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