Monday, November 20, 2017

raging storm

Photo by Tim Mossholder
Courtesy of pexels.com

like a raging storm
you crashed against my
rocks and stone walls
I built in order to protect
myself from harm

eventually you were able
to view my inner being
when I opened the front
gate to my heart and
allowed you to enter

- Written for dVerse Quadrille #45 - "rock"
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11 comments:

  1. tonispencerNovember 20, 2017 at 9:06 PM

    Gates, stones, rocks...only love can tear them down.

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  2. Frank HubenyNovember 20, 2017 at 9:11 PM

    A forceful kind of knocking at the castle walls, but it looks like it worked.

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  3. Sabio LantzNovember 20, 2017 at 10:20 PM

    Fun to let down walls, vulnerable, but fun

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  4. MishNovember 20, 2017 at 10:23 PM

    It's a good thing that some are so persistent when it comes to love. Love is always a risk, but worth taking.

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  5. sarahNovember 21, 2017 at 1:21 AM

    It doesn't matter how much you rage, love only works when you are allowed in.

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  6. Glenn ButtkusNovember 21, 2017 at 10:54 AM

    Ah yes, the sweet surrender, the volatile vulnerability, the joy & pain, the vertex of heart song; smile.

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  7. lynn__November 21, 2017 at 1:07 PM

    Storming the sea wall and opening the gates...what more can be said?

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  8. brudbergNovember 21, 2017 at 3:59 PM

    I think that we have to open the gate sooner all or later... let the right one in.

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  9. GraceNovember 21, 2017 at 7:51 PM

    I like that invitation to enter to one's heart ~

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  10. Arcadia MariaNovember 24, 2017 at 6:00 PM

    Thank you everyone.

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  11. Kim M. RussellNovember 26, 2017 at 9:10 AM

    I love a romantic rock!

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