Monday, April 8, 2019

not so lucky

with smooth words and poetic lines
he tried his best to woo her
and ace her heart thinking this time
he finally had the lucky number
but she was too shrewd and
perhaps even a bit too skeptical
to believe his words were true



- Written for dVerse Quadrille #77- Ace of Poems and Writers Digest Poetic Aside 2019 April PAD Challenge: Day 8 - lucky poem

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9 comments:

  1. De JacksonApril 8, 2019 at 7:05 PM

    Nice prompt mashup!

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  2. indybevApril 8, 2019 at 7:15 PM

    Ah, I love a smart woman!! ...and I loved your little rhyme.

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  3. SilverGardeniaApril 8, 2019 at 7:51 PM

    Lucky for her that she can see through him.

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  4. GraceApril 8, 2019 at 7:56 PM

    Good for her to be a bit skeptical.

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  5. 7eyedwonderApril 8, 2019 at 8:10 PM

    I suspect it's going to take much more than a few lines of poetry and luck to win this gal's heart.

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  6. Linda Lee LybergApril 9, 2019 at 10:19 AM

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  7. Linda Lee LybergApril 9, 2019 at 10:19 AM

    Skeptical is always good at first. Nice rhyme!

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  8. lynn__April 9, 2019 at 4:21 PM

    Beware a forked tongue...

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  9. qbitApril 10, 2019 at 6:53 PM

    Nice!

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