under the north star
she guides souls to freedom
cloaked by night’s darkness
in the south of France
they enjoy sipping red wine
under skies of blue
as the east wind blows
the clouds above turn to black
storm makes her approach
along the west coast
we watch colorful sunsets
the moon greets our eyes
- My attempt for dVerse Meeting the Bar prompt: Haiku Sequence
lovely images
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!!!
ReplyDeleteMuch✏love
Such evocative and wild imagery. This is AMAZING poetry.
ReplyDelete"along the west coast
we watch colorful sunsets
the moon greets our eyes"
This is so lovely and peaceful. Great imagery all around. You are a wordsmith.
You captured the scope if our worlds. Beautifullly. Q
ReplyDeleteThe cardinal directions, each with a story to tell. Beautifully done!
ReplyDeleteI love the compass approach in this sequence, and the way the haiku shift from star to earth, to wind and clouds, and then back to earth, like the needle of a compass. I also like the use of colour in the second haiku – you almost had the tricolour there, just missing the white – the that the storm in the third one is female. 😊
ReplyDeleteI love the theme and sequence!
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone for your kind words
ReplyDeleteThis has a nice progression to it.
ReplyDeleteA journey that reaches everywhere
ReplyDeleteA lovely set of directions!
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