she
stands under the sun
watching blue waves
crashing against rocks
ocean breeze tickles
her nostrils as seagulls
hawk above her head
she
lets her mind wander
across those waves
searching for signs
on which way to go
at sunset she receives
the answer
watching blue waves
crashing against rocks
ocean breeze tickles
her nostrils as seagulls
hawk above her head
across those waves
searching for signs
on which way to go
at sunset she receives
the answer
- Written for dVerse Monday Quadrille #133 - Stand
Very beautiful!
ReplyDeleteMakes me wonder where she decided to go. Very light and airy and enjoyable read, Arcadia Maria.
ReplyDeleteOh, the lovely seagull nostrils and how a vigilant stand is responded to in time. Wonderful quadrille.
ReplyDelete"searching for signs."
ReplyDeleteWhat? Wait... wait... what was the answer, Arcadia? Don't leave us hanging! :)
ReplyDelete-David
Well I only had 44 words to tell the story. 🤷🏾♀️😂
DeleteWonderful imagery!
ReplyDeleteLovely! I wonder where she went …
ReplyDeleteamazing
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone 🙂
ReplyDeleteA beginning and an ending ... I enjoyed your Quadrille.
ReplyDeleteA lovely seaside interlude.
ReplyDeleteVery atmospheric. Nature has a way of guiding us.
ReplyDeleteThis had so much peace in it.
ReplyDeleteI love this - sometimes the answer comes to us when we stop trying to force a solution!
ReplyDeleteThanks again everyone
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