Monday, October 30, 2023

falling in pieces

a mother watches
her baby fall to sleep
into peaceful dreams

falling in love
wasn’t on her agenda
yet it still arrived

he watches his phone
fall down the bridge
in spectacular fashion

their fall from grace
brought humility
to their once cold hearts

 
 

21 comments:

  1. Ah a newborn brings so much love and will melt the hardest hearts.

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  2. I like the way your quadrille is written from different perspectives. The first one is lovely, Maria, and made me think of my daughter and the pleasant coincidence that my grandson is one year old today.

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  3. Happy Halloween my friend! ✌πŸΌπŸŽƒ

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  4. Gratitude for you my friend! πŸ™‚πŸ«ΆπŸΌ✌πŸΌπŸ‚πŸ

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  5. Enjoyed seeing these 4 different applications of the word. In a way, love can come unexpectedly.....as can a pregnancy. And perhaps that watch falling...disappearing, gave a new lease on living in the moment as well. :)

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  6. I do very much like the four different perspectives!

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  7. I enjoyed your quadrille ... the last stanza my favorite.

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  8. Watching a baby fall asleep--yes, that love!

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