Monday, December 11, 2023

dream walking in snow

Photo by Cameron Casey
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snow crunches beneath his feet
as he follows the warm lights
guiding him home

wolves howl in the distance,
stars pepper the midnight sky

night air chills his bones
but all he thinks about is
hot cocoa and her smile
waiting at the door



17 comments:

  1. That's for sure a welcoming sight - hot cocoa and the smiles.

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  2. I love the scope of this poem 💕

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  3. I love the feel of this poem. Such a great love story!

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  4. Enjoyed how you used narrative to construct the poem's theme, Maria.

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  5. I think anyone who has lived close to snow know that crunch... a real companion walking home in snow.

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  6. Great use of sound in the crunch of the snow, Maria, and the wolves howling gives an extra chill. I love the warm ending!

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  7. Love the snowy-chilly atmosphere you wove and his being guided home to warm love.

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