enchanting eyes
caught mine
they shimmered like moonlight in winter
I fell in love too quickly
hearts split
love faded
not memories
- Written for dVerse Poetics: The Smile in a Simile. The poem is written in trinet poetry form that I'm experimenting with. Find out more about this form here at Writer's Digest
The simile, couched like a mirage in the heart of your poem, works so brilliantly, Maria, given what was gained and what was lost.
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