in the silence of a rising sun
I lie in my bed letting
my mind slowly wander
in the quietness of the
morning sun I take a breath
thankful for another day
my mind prepares for
all that awaits me
when I leave home
- Written for dVerse Quadrille:Shhhhhh.. Quiet, Please!
Early morning is a lovely quiet time to contemplate. Nice.
ReplyDeleteThank you Di.
DeleteIn the silence of the morning one can contemplate the possibilities of a new day. Well said!
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading.
DeleteI love letting my wander through the silence of a new day as well. You nailed this prompt perfectly!! Well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Cara.
DeleteI love the quiet transitions between day and night and night and day. It is holy time.
ReplyDeleteIt truly is. Thanks for reading Lisa.
DeleteI am glad the day starts well and hope the outside world can be cast outside again once day is done - Jae
ReplyDeleteThanks Jae.
DeleteI love the quietness of the morning sun too, Maria, and the sibilance in your opening line is like a quiet sizzle – the white noise in our ears when everyone and everything else is asleep.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kim.
DeleteI enjoyed the meditative feel to your poem 💞
ReplyDeleteThank you Suzanne.
DeleteNice one!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by my blog, Arcadia
Much love
Thanks Gillena.
DeleteNice if you can get it! I don't often linger, preferring to be up and running as quickly as possible. A nice little write Maria 👏
ReplyDeleteThanks Shaun.
DeleteI love that you've written about the silence of a new day's beginning....and being thankful for that. Twelve years ago my husband suffered a 6 minute cardiac arrest - not a heart attack. His heart actually stopped for 6 minutes. He is a walking miracle, alive, well, and cognitively intact. I always have been an early riser....usually at least an hour before him. Since his return from the hospital after that horrendous and frightening occurence, I have always paused a moment before I get up, look over at him sleeping quitely next to me, and am thankful for the new day. Thankful for every day of these 12 extra years I've had with him. So yes....I enjoyed reading your poem about the silence of the new day's opening.
ReplyDeleteWow. What an incredible story. I'm glad your husband made it through that. I'm glad you enjoyed reading this poem.
Deletesuch a delightful way to open one's eyes
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteA lovely practice! We should all follow suit.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rosemary.
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