Monday, February 26, 2018

as the world burns


we watch this flame
that has burn for millennia
yet we seem too transfixed
to extinguish it
maybe we are too fearful
to speak truths or
maybe we don’t really
want change as we claim
so we watch the world’s
fire illuminate the sky


- Written for dVerse Quadrille - Burning Inspiration

13 comments:

  1. A timely post. I think the youth of Parkland are illuminating the sky.

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  2. Oh my...powerfully put. We are often so stuck in our ways, so fearful of change and afraid to speak our reality. I guess, to be honest, I should say "I" instead of "we."

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  3. I sometimes think that we are obsessed with the Phoenix myth... let it burn and something new and better will rise...

    But the day will come when we cannot rise again.

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  4. So afraid to change and now we wait and hope that it will turn out to be good on it's own.
    Very nicely portrayed...

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  5. I held my breath reading this. It is ominous and it asks more questions than it provides answers.

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  6. Oh gosh this is so timely! I wonder when we will speak up.. sigh...

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  7. You capture that collective feeling of paralysis and helplessness that stunts our ability to act on our own behalf.

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  8. Thank you everyone for reading and commmenting. :)

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  9. Too true words, these. And so sad.

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  10. It makes me wonder what the fire is.

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  11. Powerful! Do we really want the changes? Are we too afraid? shades of J. Alfred Prufrock. Excellent work.

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  12. More like we are afraid of making changes. So we just keep on watching...

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