Thursday, March 29, 2018

evening whispers


we whisper into the breeze
as we lounge under palm trees
at nightfall we greet the stars
and the moon becomes all ours


- Written for dVerse Meeting the Bar: Tanaga poetry

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9 comments:

  1. WaltermarksMarch 29, 2018 at 8:35 PM

    Ah, that sounds like my kind of evening. Let me see if I can envision a Spring evening under the palms. It feels great, thanks!

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  2. Frank HubenyMarch 29, 2018 at 8:37 PM

    I like the rhyme on "stars" and "ours" and the idea of the moon becoming ours. Nice tanaga!

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  3. Kim M. RussellMarch 30, 2018 at 3:34 AM

    A relaxing tanaga - and I like the half-rhyme of 'stars/ours'.

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  4. Merril D. SmithMarch 30, 2018 at 7:05 AM

    Lovely image and tanaga.

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  5. brudbergMarch 30, 2018 at 12:44 PM

    Love it... so romantic to share the moon with someone.

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  6. Arcadia MariaMarch 30, 2018 at 1:57 PM

    Thank you everyone for reading and commenting. Much appreciated. :)

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  7. D.AveryMarch 31, 2018 at 7:31 AM

    Your tanaga took me to a quiet isle. Thanks.

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  8. lynn__March 31, 2018 at 1:17 PM

    Sounds perfect!

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  9. lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comApril 2, 2018 at 8:24 AM

    Ah...sounds like words I say on our deck here in Bermuda, under the moon and the stars. Lovely!

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