Thursday, January 24, 2019

note


he left her a note
with words too harsh to speak of
they still stung them both



9 comments:

  1. This is so painstakingly raw and poignant. Words hurt 💔💔

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  2. Truth in poetry. The pain of it is exquisite. Well done!

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  3. Sometimes it is the words unspoken (delivered by text or note) that hurt the most.

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  4. relationships are messy and painful way too much. why?

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  5. Very potent for a Senryu, well done.

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  6. one may hope to
    avoid the hurts in hurting.
    no pain is polite.

    I loved your lines, thank you.

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  7. I like how you described so briefly such shared pain.

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  8. Some words are too painful to say...

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