Monday, February 11, 2019

a kiss

I had imagined a kiss with you
would be like smooching the stars
or seeing fireworks in a summer sky
but I experienced neither of them
just the sensation of soft lips
upon mine that took me to a high
I never achieved again


- Written for dVerse Quadrille #73-A Prelude to a Kiss
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14 comments:

  1. De JacksonFebruary 11, 2019 at 7:32 PM

    "smooching the stars" -- LOVE that!

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  2. Merril D. SmithFebruary 11, 2019 at 8:01 PM

    Sounds like quite a kiss, nonetheless!

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  3. JillyFebruary 11, 2019 at 9:03 PM

    Yeow!

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  4. robtkistnerFebruary 11, 2019 at 9:34 PM

    Oh, only one kiss - but sounds like a good one...

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  5. Kim M. RussellFebruary 12, 2019 at 3:57 AM

    I love the idea of smooching the stars, Maria, but I’d be happy with the sensation of soft lips too.

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  6. Arcadia MariaFebruary 12, 2019 at 2:01 PM

    Thanks everyone 🙂

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  7. lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comFebruary 12, 2019 at 2:35 PM

    oh.....sounds like a soft gentle brushing kiss.....sometimes those are the most romantic. And it seems to be so here.....a high achieved that sadly was never achieved again. Sometimes the most gentle can be the most ardent. :)

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  8. brudbergFebruary 12, 2019 at 2:57 PM

    Maybe we cannot really describe the kiss well
    stars are not enough
    to describe the kiss

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  9. PratibhaFebruary 12, 2019 at 8:17 PM

    So true !

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  10. Frank HubenyFebruary 12, 2019 at 9:05 PM

    Nice thought: Kisses can take one higher than the stars.

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  11. Jade LiFebruary 13, 2019 at 12:14 AM

    a real kiss is better than any imagined one

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  12. katiemiafrederickFebruary 13, 2019 at 2:39 AM

    Star Lit Rise
    Moon Lit Breath
    Souls
    Alight
    Kissing Dreams..:)

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  13. purplepeninportland.comFebruary 13, 2019 at 4:39 PM

    Best high - a kiss you don’t forget,

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