Monday, January 27, 2020

hair


when I was young
my hair was thick,
curly and wild 
I often wished it
was tamer with
smooth strands

now that I am older
time and nature
thinning many
of those strands
I often look back
wishing I still had
those thick curls


- Written for dVerse Quadrille #96: Wild Monday

11 comments:

  1. Isn't that the way with ageing? In our youth we could hardly wait to be old enough to drink, to vote, to get out of the house, to . . . on and on and on. Now...I am content with my grey undyed hair that is naturally curly - I threw out my hairdryer and gave up trying to straighten it. I am content with a more natural look now. I look back and see all the time spent in trying to look like others, like the popular girls, like the movie stars in the magazines etc. What a waste. Much nicer now...I am me.

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  2. I prefer the wild look of my youth as well until I remember all the mistakes I made.

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  3. I’m so glad you went with wild hair! I’ve always wanted thick, curly hair. I hope you have photographs of your luscious hair.

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  4. oh adulting. i love the sense of honesty in your poem.

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  5. Oh! god . I can so much relate to this poem. I have faced the same situation. My hair too was thick and curly and how I wished it to be straight and light. But now ,that it is receding, I wish the mack..

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  6. I think some of my hair migrated down to my upper lip and chin from my hairline.

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  7. Oh... I can understand that... I am happy to still have some decent hair.

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  8. This is so wonderful. You had me looking in the mirror, feeling those words.

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  9. Thank you everyone for your kind words

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  10. We never seem to want what we have at the time.

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