Poetry Writings
Oh this is so very very sad.
I really hope this is just a temporary separation.
Beauty and sadness all rolled in to only a few words! Well done.
I imagined your heart swelled like the moon and then shrunk to a crescent. That last kiss really lasts.
It makes me glad to think the memory of that last kiss is still there.
Beautifully poignant.
Thank you everyone
Maybe if you had known it to be the last you would not have enjoyed it as much.
Beautifully poignant. We never know that, do we? But Brudberg makes a very valid point.
Oh this is so very very sad.
ReplyDeleteI really hope this is just a temporary separation.
ReplyDeleteBeauty and sadness all rolled in to only a few words! Well done.
ReplyDeleteI imagined your heart swelled like the moon and then shrunk to a crescent. That last kiss really lasts.
ReplyDeleteIt makes me glad to think the memory of that last kiss is still there.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully poignant.
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone
ReplyDeleteMaybe if you had known it to be the last you would not have enjoyed it as much.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully poignant. We never know that, do we? But Brudberg makes a very valid point.
ReplyDelete