they
raise fists into air
as
feet march across ground
they
seek to turn the ocean’s tide
threatening to down them out
with
their eyes on the horizon
they
seek a revolution
in
the rising sun that will
transform
the color of the sky
- Written for dVerse Quadrille #174: You say you want a revolution
Well done... and will turn the lanscape blood red!
ReplyDeletethought-provoking.
ReplyDeleteYou’ve captured the revolutionary spirit in this quadrille, Maria – I love the way you begin with those fists being raised in the air and the feet marching, and end with the ‘rising sun that will /transform the color of the sky’.
ReplyDeleteDefiance! Even nature has no power there. Revolutionary tempo.
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone.
ReplyDeleteYou brought the revolution alive! Well done.
ReplyDeleteLove how the spirit of revolution is encaptured in your verse 🙌
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