Monday, July 24, 2023

taking in the view

Photo by Sean Oulashin 
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we sat on a blanket
taking in the view
of aqua waters
beckoning us to dive inn

you take my hand
as we approach the waves
never in fear of getting
lost in the tide

together we could go
beyond the sun and stars


- Written for dVerse Quadrille #180: Pouring Out Our Poems

 

 

20 comments:

  1. Brings back pleasant memories along the shoreline. Beautiful poem Arcadia.

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  2. Very nicely done. It is amazing how much safer we feel if connected to someone else when the waver rolls in and bowls us off our feet!

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  3. Love the ending where lovers can overcome the fear of getting lost in the tide.

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  4. Incredibly lovely, Arcadia... so sweet...

    Much love,
    David
    SkepticsKaddish.com

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    1. Thank you David. I enjoyed your poem as well.

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  5. Lovely romantic mood.

    Much💜love

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