Monday, July 10, 2023

twelve o'clock

we dance under stars 
one warm summer night 
I can see moonlight
in your eyes making 
everything feel right 
 
we glide across the
dance floor as my heart
flutters from your kiss
 
when the clock strikes  
twelve I am pulled away 
from this dream
 
 
 
 
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23 comments:

  1. JadeLiJuly 11, 2023 at 12:06 AM

    Why does something always have to interrupt the best dreams?

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  2. Melissa LemayJuly 11, 2023 at 1:37 AM

    Cinderella-esque.✨

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  3. Kim M. RussellJuly 11, 2023 at 3:38 AM

    Cinderella dreaming…

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  4. GraceJuly 11, 2023 at 7:32 AM

    An interrupted sweet magical dream.

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  5. AnonymousJuly 11, 2023 at 7:51 AM

    A fairytale, even. Lovely write.

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  6. SusanJuly 11, 2023 at 8:05 AM

    I could feel the intensity build then disappear. Well played!

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  7. Dwight L. RothJuly 11, 2023 at 10:14 AM

    Beautifully written!

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  8. Merril D. SmithJuly 11, 2023 at 2:41 PM

    A lovely fairy tale dream!

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  9. AliJuly 12, 2023 at 11:51 AM

    Dream of dancing under the stars, how divine! A lovely image in my mind.

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  10. LesleyJuly 14, 2023 at 3:38 AM

    Delightful

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  11. Frewin55July 17, 2023 at 4:49 AM

    A lovely dream evocation blown by the bell...

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  12. Arcadia MariaJuly 17, 2023 at 8:22 AM

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