Thursday, January 12, 2017

on a bridge

on a bridge I left you my heart
thinking you would find it one day
instead hopes and dreams fell apart
on a bridge I left you my heart
but my grand plan was not too smart
for another led you astray
on a bridge I left you my heart
thinking you would find it one day



"Central Park" by Rachael Purdy
Courtesy of all-free-download.com


23 comments:

  1. A lovely triolet poem ~ But sad that it was not meant to be ~

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  2. I liked the repeating line: "on a bridge I left you my heart"

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  3. Great triolet. Maybe someday the waiting will end.

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  4. someday, perhaps :) lovely writing :)

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  5. A beautiful write Maria, I hope you can allow the part you left on the bridge back into your heart so your heart is whole again ��

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  6. Such an enchanting triolet!!❤️

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  7. This reminds me of the movie "Bridges of Madison County"...very nice...bkm

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  8. Reads melancholic, like a song you can hear hummed by a maiden working the mill.

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  9. Thanks you ayala, Sanaa, bkm and Selena for reading and commenting.

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  10. So moving...the line you chose as the repeating line makes it work so well.

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  11. great triolet well spun and the image brings to mind all those padlocks people leave on bridges all over the world - wonder where the keys go

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    1. Yes like the one in Paris which I had the pleasure of seeing in person

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  12. instead hopes and dreams fell apart
    on a bridge I left you my heart

    One gets let down if the heart is distracted just one bit. Wonderful triolet Arcadia!

    Hank

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  13. Lovely triolet. Those related lines add to the heartache.

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