This evening I saw a man standing by the road, holding up a
sign I could not read in the fading light.
He stood in the bitter cold, the ground covered by the recent snowfall. As I drove
home, I thought about a memory when, as a child, I would play in the snow. Snow days were always the best. I would spend my time outdoors trying to
build snowman or just snowballs until my finger tingled. Then I would come inside to warm up, my feet
by the heater and hot chocolate in my hand as mom did housework. A little while later, I would go back outside
to play in the beautiful snow until the daylight began to fade. It seems like that was the only time when I enjoyed
the snow. In later years, it has become more
of a nuisance than a joy. I suppose that
man on the side of the road may feel the same way too. He may have once, as a child, made snow angels in his backyard. But now as he stands in the bitter cold, the snow is just
another curse to his destitute state.
on bitter cold days
the sun shines upon
white snow
but leaves us no
warmth
The snow is a nuisance for me as well, although the first few snowfalls, the warmer, wetter kind that leave the trees coated in white are still a delight to walk through. However, I don't make snow angels anymore.
ReplyDeleteI love the point of view you took. Probably, it is close to the truth.
ReplyDeleteI used to love the snow very much, but have fallen a little out of love with it lately, especially in cities where it is nothing but dirty slush and cold black ice. I like the way your poetry started with one thing and veered off into a different direction - if it doesn't surprise you when you write it, it's not really poetry, right?
ReplyDeleteVery true
DeleteExcellent haibun with good description and the juxtapositioning of the man, out in the cold, and his feelings about snow now. Haiiku wraps it up nicely.
ReplyDeleteSadly I see these things around me in the city subway specially ~ Maybe he did once but he became bitter and broken in the later years ~ So sad though...
ReplyDeleteLovely story. My mom taught me how to make snow angels. I think like that too about the destitute people holding up signs in the cold. I think "when I was a freshman in college, he was probably just being born." And I think about how his life could have turned out differently. Very sad. What happens to a person that makes them feel that choice is reasonable?
ReplyDeleteyes, you brought me back to that space in my childhood. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteZQ
Love how you tied the present back to the memory... I still love snow sometimes, but not when I have to work. If I'm free and can use my skies it's perfect. Lovely haiku
ReplyDeleteOh, yes, our perspective on snow can certainly change depending on our circumstances and exposure to it.
ReplyDeletethis works so beautifully....the joy for you as a child in the snow....countered by the man cold with the sign. Heartful. Jane
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone for reading and commenting. :)
ReplyDeleteI too liked how you connected seeing the man by the road to your past memory as a child enjoying the snow. Certainly perspectives can change through the years and with our circumstances.
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