Tuesday, February 7, 2017

kamikaze

he came
like a kamikaze
into my view
everything else
became a blur
shaken, I tried
to keep my head
above the waves
but your whiskey
smile got to me
every time




19 comments:

  1. Oh! Whiskey smile is perfection.

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  2. Ahhh, this takes me back to a wonderful Samurai of my own with his sake smile. Super poem.

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  3. Lovely to read whimsey & romance during these dark days; smile.

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  4. Whiskey smiles are dangerous -- but great descriptive words!

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    1. Haha yes they can be. Thanks for reading.

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  5. I think that whiskey smile would trap anyone...

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    1. Haha that is true. You and Paul's comments have me giggling over here. Thanks for reading.

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  6. Ahem ahem.. I think I would be trapped too if someone flashed me a whiskey smile :D Beautifully penned!

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  7. Makes ME smile (though minus whisky). Lovely fun.

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