Tuesday, February 7, 2017

kamikaze

he came
like a kamikaze
into my view
everything else
became a blur
shaken, I tried
to keep my head
above the waves
but your whiskey
smile got to me
every time

- Written for dVerse Poetics: Muse Mixology.



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18 comments:

  1. ✿February 7, 2017 at 7:35 PM

    Perfect.

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  2. De JacksonFebruary 7, 2017 at 7:54 PM

    Oh! Whiskey smile is perfection.

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  3. tonispencerFebruary 7, 2017 at 8:18 PM

    Ahhh, this takes me back to a wonderful Samurai of my own with his sake smile. Super poem.

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  4. Glenn ButtkusFebruary 7, 2017 at 9:59 PM

    Lovely to read whimsey & romance during these dark days; smile.

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 8, 2017 at 9:34 AM

    Whiskey smile is a great line :)

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  6. indybevFebruary 8, 2017 at 12:27 PM

    Whiskey smiles are dangerous -- but great descriptive words!

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  7. Paul John DearFebruary 8, 2017 at 3:13 PM

    Oh boy...whisky smile...ahem!

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  8. brudbergFebruary 8, 2017 at 3:43 PM

    I think that whiskey smile would trap anyone...

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    1. Arcadia MariaFebruary 8, 2017 at 8:18 PM

      Haha that is true. You and Paul's comments have me giggling over here. Thanks for reading.

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  9. Sanaa RizviFebruary 9, 2017 at 9:44 AM

    Ahem ahem.. I think I would be trapped too if someone flashed me a whiskey smile :D Beautifully penned!

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  10. Rosemary Nissen-WadeFebruary 11, 2017 at 12:39 AM

    Makes ME smile (though minus whisky). Lovely fun.

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