Monday, March 13, 2017

He

he has awaken feelings deep inside 
that I thought were long dead
whether it’s love or lust 
I really do not care 
for he tastes like spring rain
and smells like summer sun
making my body hum to 
the beat of his drumming heart

- Written for dVerse Quadrille #28 "spring"
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13 comments:

  1. Frank HubenyMarch 13, 2017 at 8:59 PM

    I liked the sound of "sun", "hum" and "drum" in the last three lines. Taste and smell are nicely linked to the seasons and it looks like one is coming out of winter.

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  2. ImeldaMarch 13, 2017 at 10:47 PM

    Your piece is very descriptive and sensual. :-)

    ~Imelda

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  3. CedarwindMarch 14, 2017 at 12:24 AM

    Nicely done :)

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  4. brudbergMarch 14, 2017 at 1:22 AM

    I love how all the senses and the seasons are there

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  5. Kim M. RussellMarch 14, 2017 at 4:35 AM

    A beautifully sensual Quadrille! I love the rhythm, internal rhyme and the similes in:
    '...he tastes like spring rain
    and smells like summer sun
    making my body hum to
    the beat of his drumming heart'.

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  6. Sanaa RizviMarch 14, 2017 at 7:42 AM

    Wonderful sensuous write!!❤️

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  7. lynn__March 14, 2017 at 8:37 AM

    Spring has sprung ;)

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  8. indybevMarch 14, 2017 at 11:13 AM

    I love "tastes like spring rain and smells like summer sun". Ahhhh, I think I'm in love! Great read!

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  9. Paul John DearMarch 14, 2017 at 2:11 PM

    Very sensual and evocative

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  10. Arcadia MariaMarch 14, 2017 at 8:30 PM

    Thank you everyone ☺

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  11. GraceMarch 15, 2017 at 8:21 PM

    Sensual and exciting :-)

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  12. ZQMarch 17, 2017 at 5:04 PM

    I need that beat... but at 70 she needs to be at least 69 :)
    a perk little piece.

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  13. Arcadia MariaMarch 17, 2017 at 9:33 PM

    Thank you Grace and R.K. :)

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