Monday, March 13, 2017

He

he has awaken feelings deep inside 
that I thought were long dead
whether it’s love or lust 
I really do not care 
for he tastes like spring rain
and smells like summer sun
making my body hum to 
the beat of his drumming heart

13 comments:

  1. I liked the sound of "sun", "hum" and "drum" in the last three lines. Taste and smell are nicely linked to the seasons and it looks like one is coming out of winter.

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  2. Your piece is very descriptive and sensual. :-)

    ~Imelda

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  3. I love how all the senses and the seasons are there

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  4. A beautifully sensual Quadrille! I love the rhythm, internal rhyme and the similes in:
    '...he tastes like spring rain
    and smells like summer sun
    making my body hum to
    the beat of his drumming heart'.

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  5. Wonderful sensuous write!!❤️

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  6. I love "tastes like spring rain and smells like summer sun". Ahhhh, I think I'm in love! Great read!

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  7. I need that beat... but at 70 she needs to be at least 69 :)
    a perk little piece.

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