Thursday, October 17, 2019

majestic


his majestic smile
honey brown eyes
lured me in like
a sailor listening
to a siren’s song

I should have
been more careful
not venturing out
into deep waters
like mom said

now I’m immerse
head under water
by his alluring magic
that now has gotten
a total hold on me


- Posted for tonight's dVerse OLN

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8 comments:

  1. Revived WriterOctober 17, 2019 at 8:26 PM

    I like that image of falling in love as falling into deep water -- perhaps without knowing how to swim.

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  2. lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comOctober 17, 2019 at 9:59 PM

    "like a sailor listening to a siren's song" LOVE that line!

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  3. Frank HubenyOctober 18, 2019 at 10:50 AM

    Very nice description of the majesty involved with attraction.

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  4. indybevOctober 18, 2019 at 11:46 AM

    Those honey-brown eyes are dangerous! Nice write.

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  5. Gayle Walters RoseOctober 18, 2019 at 6:49 PM

    You describe that feeling of being consumed very well. As long as you're happy, enjoy it!!!

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  6. colleenOctober 19, 2019 at 9:57 AM

    I hope you can come up for air when you want to.

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  7. brudbergOctober 19, 2019 at 3:34 PM

    I think we sometimes have to dare... but there is that risk of drowning... somewhere you always need a life-line to get back

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  8. Arcadia MariaOctober 20, 2019 at 6:13 PM

    Thank you everyone 🙂

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