she
did her best
to arrange the lines
in perfect formation
despite
best efforts
the words still manage
to derange the meaning
she
continues in silence
rearranging sentences
hoping to get it right,
eventually
to arrange the lines
in perfect formation
the words still manage
to derange the meaning
rearranging sentences
hoping to get it right,
eventually
- Written for Twiglet#228 - deranged silence
I think I know this feeling. Good one, Arcadia!
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
Delete"Hoping to get it right" boy, so I identify with that. Nice work
ReplyDeleteSomeone called it revision. I call it frustration!
ReplyDeleteLol. Thanks for reading
DeleteIt's difficult to create while your fingers are crossed, eh? Twigilicious work!
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteOh my, that is what I have been doing lately, rearranging words so they will convey the meaning clearing.
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