Tuesday, May 25, 2021

deranged silence

she did her best
to arrange the lines
in perfect formation
 
despite best efforts
the words still manage
to derange the meaning
 
she continues in silence
rearranging sentences
hoping to get it right,
eventually

9 comments:

  1. I think I know this feeling. Good one, Arcadia!

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  2. "Hoping to get it right" boy, so I identify with that. Nice work

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  3. Someone called it revision. I call it frustration!

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  4. It's difficult to create while your fingers are crossed, eh? Twigilicious work!

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  5. Oh my, that is what I have been doing lately, rearranging words so they will convey the meaning clearing.

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