he
felt the earth
shift
beneath his feet
when
the sun rose the
day
after the goodbye
he
had spent all night
drinking
whiskey with
the
moon singing sad
love
songs with the stars
he
wished he could believe
things
get better in time
- Written for dVerse Quadrille #172
This is sad with the moon singing sad love songs with the stars.
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done. Breaking up is a paradigm shift for sure!
ReplyDeletesad times beautifully put.
ReplyDeleteThis is so sad, but written beautifully.
ReplyDeleteHopefully he'll see, and the moon will sing another tune.
ReplyDeleteThere's another love song out there. I hope he will hear it when he's ready.
ReplyDeleteOne of the most difficult shifts...relationships, love loss. This was so beautifully rendered to encapsulate that feeling.
ReplyDeleteThis is such a sad song to loss of love.
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone.
ReplyDeleteYou've got this just right - so very touching.
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