Thursday, April 28, 2016

Poem for today - an acrostic poem:

“admirer”

a glance from you set off sparks within
deep desires inside build up like lava
my adoration risks clouding my head
I cannot stop myself falling for you
red lipstick imprints I leave on notes
every poem I write is all about you
realistically this dream will never come true















26 comments:

  1. I have an intense urge to steal the phrase "adoration risks". It's just so clever!

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    1. Haha. I always find it a compliment when someone is inspired to use my words or lines in their own writing. Thanks Magaly.

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    1. Sometimes it ends that way. Thanks for reading Linda.

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  3. Don't rule it out!! It CAN happen. Really it can.

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    1. Ah an optimist at heart. We can all use one in our lives. Thanks for reading Mary.

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  4. This is so good! :D I agree, your acrostic is inspirational. Beautifully executed.

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  5. Oh, I was hoping for "happily ever after," but your final line tells me otherwise. Good work with the acrostic.

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  6. I think we have to believe it's possible... and sometimes it is... and if nothing else it's good to live on hope..

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    1. Hope can keep a person inspired. Thank you brudberg.

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  7. I think admiration even if it's not reciprocated has a lesson for us somewhere...whether it's patience for things to come or acceptance of moving on. Nice acrostic!

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    1. Yes that is very true. Thanks for reading.

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  8. Unrequited love. How sad is that?

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    1. It can be sad but it doesn't have to rule our entire lives. Thanks for reading.

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  9. The lipstick imprints made me think of the angst of teenage (unrequited) love. Well done.

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  10. Ah the heartache of unrequited love...

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  11. So hawt. Ha you know who this xD these poems are very well written, I'm so proud of you. ☺

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