“admirer”
a glance from you set off sparks within
deep desires inside build up like lava
my adoration risks clouding my head
I cannot stop myself falling for you
red lipstick imprints I leave on notes
every poem I write is all about you
realistically this dream will never come true
Acrostic, well done. :)
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DeleteWell written.
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DeleteI have an intense urge to steal the phrase "adoration risks". It's just so clever!
ReplyDeleteHaha. I always find it a compliment when someone is inspired to use my words or lines in their own writing. Thanks Magaly.
DeleteThat last line is so sad.
ReplyDeleteThat last line is so sad.
ReplyDeleteSometimes it ends that way. Thanks for reading Linda.
DeleteDon't rule it out!! It CAN happen. Really it can.
ReplyDeleteAh an optimist at heart. We can all use one in our lives. Thanks for reading Mary.
DeleteThis is so good! :D I agree, your acrostic is inspirational. Beautifully executed.
ReplyDeleteLots of love,
Sanaa
Thank you Sanaa
DeleteOh, I was hoping for "happily ever after," but your final line tells me otherwise. Good work with the acrostic.
ReplyDeleteThank you Victoria
DeleteI think we have to believe it's possible... and sometimes it is... and if nothing else it's good to live on hope..
ReplyDeleteHope can keep a person inspired. Thank you brudberg.
DeleteI think admiration even if it's not reciprocated has a lesson for us somewhere...whether it's patience for things to come or acceptance of moving on. Nice acrostic!
ReplyDeleteYes that is very true. Thanks for reading.
DeleteVery nicely written!
ReplyDeleteThank you Carol
DeleteUnrequited love. How sad is that?
ReplyDeleteIt can be sad but it doesn't have to rule our entire lives. Thanks for reading.
DeleteThe lipstick imprints made me think of the angst of teenage (unrequited) love. Well done.
ReplyDeleteAh the heartache of unrequited love...
ReplyDeleteSo hawt. Ha you know who this xD these poems are very well written, I'm so proud of you. ☺
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