We were both young and
inexperienced tweens. Yet chemistry and
hormones drew us together over a summer weekend. The last night we lounged under the night
sky, sharing a first kiss. It was the
first time I ever kissed a boy, though I believe it wasn’t your first time
kissing a girl. I can still remember
your lips upon mine – warm, soft, wet.
My naivety slowly melted under the July moon with you. I wish we could have stayed in that moment –
frozen in time - oblivious to all that will come in the future.
the night stars twinkles
as they dance around the moon
to sensual beats
- Written for dVerse Halibun Monday - Twinkle, twinkle
Yes there are some moments when we wish time stands still..forever.
ReplyDeleteYes indeed. There are moments we wish we could freeze and hold on to. Such a sweet haibun, such a lovely haiku.
ReplyDeleteA first kiss under the stars. I remember mine...but I was a little older. And a funny thing I just remembered. We had heard thunder. At the moments our lips met, a sudden blinding light hit us, and we froze, thinking we had been struck by lightning. But it was my mom turning on the porch light and telling me to come inside. LOL.
ReplyDeleteThat is too funny. If that happened to me, it would have taken me 5 years to kiss again. LOL.
DeleteSuch a sweet moment!
ReplyDeleteSMiLes.. thanks for this..
ReplyDeleteas i haven't thOught about
my first kiss for perHaps a decade
or more.. and nah.. no first time
for the Alabama Girl
visiting a little
South in
Florida
Panhandle..
for Virgin
boys who
only dreamed of Girls..
But only a kiss..
But only a kiss
and so much more FeeLinG..:)
Starry Starry
niGht.. as above
so beLow..;)
:)
DeleteI think every human being remember their first kiss... yours had such a glorious setting that makes it even more memorable...
ReplyDeletea sweet, rare and forever moment witnessed by the stars...
ReplyDeleteAwwee... love those sensual beats under the moonlit night. <3
ReplyDeleteOh that first kiss and the feelings it brings...seems we always remember the person and the place. Mine was on the couch in my parents' house - stolen quickly while mom and dad were in the kitchen talking. How much more romantic yours was! ��
ReplyDeleteLate to the posting and reading for haibun Monday - but enjoying so much!
Thanks. I don't remember it being so romantic (maybe cuz I was young). Certainly sounds romantic in this poem.
DeleteI love the innocence in this, that special, remembered first kiss. Yes, those are moments we wish we could hold onto.
ReplyDeleteFirst kiss lasting memories, and impressions made all under impressive sky. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteA sweet, starry-eyed moment for sure!
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