Monday, August 28, 2017

bliss

such lazy days
can be so rewarding
the summer breeze
in our hair
the sun kissing
our skin
your soft whispers
in my ear brings
me to a dream
that I wish never
to awake from
for being with you
is such a bliss

- Written for dVerse Quadrille #39 "bliss"
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10 comments:

  1. Frank HubenyAugust 28, 2017 at 8:35 PM

    It is nice to have dreams one doesn't want to wake from. Most of mine lately are busy trying to get somewhere and then not being able to.

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  2. ✿August 28, 2017 at 9:02 PM

    "in our hair
    the sun kissing
    our skin"

    I love the way the middle line plays with what's before and what's after (first hair, then skin). I love its heat on my arms, but also on my scalp.

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  3. tonispencerAugust 28, 2017 at 10:10 PM

    Oh my. this is lovely.

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  4. Kim M. RussellAugust 29, 2017 at 3:45 AM

    Blissful!

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  5. brudbergAugust 29, 2017 at 8:37 AM

    Love to be with someone like that.

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  6. purplepeninportland.comAugust 29, 2017 at 3:25 PM

    Sounds like a summer romance come to full bloom. Beautiful.

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  7. Arcadia MariaAugust 29, 2017 at 7:37 PM

    Thank you everyone.

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  8. MargaretAugust 29, 2017 at 10:22 PM

    Very dreamy indeed.

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  9. Sumana RoyAugust 31, 2017 at 1:04 AM

    Aw...Such happiness and bliss. "brings / me to a dream
    /that I wish never /to awake from...The most precious space to be in.

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  10. AnonymousAugust 31, 2017 at 1:31 PM

    Love this love poem! True bliss!

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