Thursday, August 24, 2017

last day of summer

Photo courtesy of pexels.com

on the beach we sat
side by side
watching the sunset
hand in hand
we counted down
the time
we still had together                                                      
this night
for you would be gone
by tomorrow
I will still be here with
our promises
to never forget these days
and short nights

14 comments:

  1. Oh....summer love. So sweet and delectable, until the days dwindle down.
    Lovely post.

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  2. So many september songs played through my head... not to mention Dear John songs. Good work with this creative piece.
    ZQ

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  3. End of summer love - bittersweet and full of longing. I often wondered if my summer love would remember me over the long winter when absent from each.

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  4. Endings are all bittersweet and those brief summer love affairs esp.

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  5. Some promises evaporate along with summertime...

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  6. Summer is in many ways unreal... a story written many times.

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  7. Ah, I think we've all been there - instantly recognisable!

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  8. A sweet summer love song. Something I have never personally experienced but wish I had.

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  9. This poem follows on so well from Alison's about dementia. Does the past disappear when we forget?

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  10. I've never experienced one (or more) of those brief but powerful summer romances that cling us so tightly to another. But I do know how our emotions can carry us away and bond us with our memories.

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  11. Sweet...hold on to those short summer memories ~

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  12. Let's hear it for summer loves. So bittersweet for the young. Smiles and memories here.

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