your
words cut me like a razor
and
I cannot stop the bleeding
tongue
etching scars like a laser
your
words cut me like a razor
spoken
straight without a chaser
your
once warm eyes were misleading
your
words cut me like a razor
and
I cannot stop the bleeding
This was a fine triolet. I enjoyed the read Arcadia...
ReplyDeleteWords are actually worse than stick and stone.
ReplyDeleteThis is so tragic :( indeed words have the power to pierce through our hearts.
ReplyDelete"spoken straight without a chaser"...great line, plus I like that "chaser, razor, laser" rhyme...JIM
ReplyDeleteNice repeating lines with razor and bleeding.
ReplyDeleteThose cuts can be bloody. A lovely triolet Arcadia!
ReplyDeletecruelty is a terrible weapon to visit upon another. i see a body cringing under the attack
ReplyDeleteThe word is like a two edged sword. Lovely and painful, the lyrical sound accentuates the pain
ReplyDeletewords are so powerful
ReplyDeleteLovely in form. Words can be so damaging.
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone for reading and your kind comments. Much appreciated :)
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