when
he gazed at me
I felt
like the only woman
in
the room, despite the
loud
chaos surrounding us
in
this private conversation
he gave
me a simple wink
stealing
my breath and heart
away,
causing me to fall
over
cliffs head first
- Written for dVerse Quadrille #68-Winkle, Winkle, Little Poem and Poetic Aside 2018 November PAD Challenge Day 5: private poem
Nice prompt mashup, Arcadia! ;)
ReplyDeleteOh how romantic😊. I like it.
ReplyDeletePat
That wink is the clincher, smiles.
ReplyDeleteWinks can be very effective.
ReplyDeleteA welcome wink!
ReplyDeletehe must have had that magic in his wink and twinkle too
ReplyDeleteA wink can be like a jolt.
ReplyDeleteSoo romantic!❤️
ReplyDeleteOh, what a closing line:
ReplyDelete"over cliffs head first"
Lovely!
Thank you everyone for your kind comments.
ReplyDeleteI could clearly picture this interaction. Love the ending.
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ReplyDeleteHi Arcadia! I enjoyed reading your poem here, it was well written... that must have been a powerful wink!
ReplyDeleteSorry about messing up the post twice... :-(
...rob from Image & Verse
My “wink”