Monday, November 5, 2018

wink


when he gazed at me
I felt like the only woman
in the room, despite the
loud chaos surrounding us
in this private conversation
he gave me a simple wink
stealing my breath and heart
away, causing me to fall
over cliffs head first


14 comments:

  1. Oh how romantic😊. I like it.

    Pat

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  2. That wink is the clincher, smiles.

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  3. he must have had that magic in his wink and twinkle too

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  4. Oh, what a closing line:

    "over cliffs head first"

    Lovely!

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  5. Thank you everyone for your kind comments.

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  6. I could clearly picture this interaction. Love the ending.

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  9. Hi Arcadia! I enjoyed reading your poem here, it was well written... that must have been a powerful wink!
    Sorry about messing up the post twice... :-(

    ...rob from Image & Verse

    My “wink”

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