Thursday, November 15, 2018

they won't know


a passion forbidden
always too enticing
they wont’ know
we tell ourselves
trysts in darkness
comes to light
shattering our charades
despite all this
we still dance
the forbidden tango
telling ourselves that
they won’t know


16 comments:

  1. reminds me of that old song, "The Dark End of the Street". a timeless tale of desire and deception that you capture well here

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  2. You think they don't know but they always do

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  3. I like the repetition of this line "they wont’ know" tying the poem together.

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  4. If you believe they don't know, then in your world - they don't! Enjoy this wrire. Bold and brave Arcadis. Like it... :-)

    ...rob from Image & Verse
    Lost in Azure

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  5. Self deception is so easy. I have found myself convincing myself of things that, now, looking back on them, were so obvious. A well-told truth here.

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  6. Ha! I think everybody knows especially what we are trying to hide and keep secret. It's great to keep on dancing though. Well penned!
    -HA

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  7. If they don't like it, they'll let you know. Keep on tangoing :)

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  8. I think most times these secrets are less secret than we think... but often it's also more accepted too.

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  9. That forbidden tango can explode sooner than later.

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  10. The lies, we weave around ourselves, to hide the truth and pain that we deny to ourselves. Is the dance worth delaying the hurt and pain, when forced to face reality? Wish, I could answer that question, because I don't know.

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  11. telling ourselves... poignant, a difficult quandary. Made me think a bit of this lovely piece I have been loving lately from Amanda Shires

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JCLeDdFL8lg

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  12. Thank you everyone for reading and your kind comments

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  13. tryst in darkness. forbidden tango. wow. sensual phrases.

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