Thursday, May 2, 2019

hold me tight

will you hold me tight
until morning light
you kiss
me soft as the night
and it feels so right
such bliss
that makes my heart bright
and dims the moonlight
like this


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11 comments:

  1. Dr. Crystal GrimesMay 2, 2019 at 6:49 PM

    A sweet poem I can relate to - just married. :-)

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  2. GraceMay 2, 2019 at 7:51 PM

    A very sweet lai, soft as kiss in the moonlight.

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  3. Glenn ButtkusMay 2, 2019 at 8:06 PM

    This Lai smells of orchids and honeysuckle; several poems about love out here tonight. Love is the most popular Muse, it seems.

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  4. Mary HoodMay 2, 2019 at 8:10 PM

    Sweet Lai!

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  5. Revived WriterMay 2, 2019 at 8:35 PM

    Very nicely done!

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  6. lillianMay 3, 2019 at 5:51 AM

    ...makes my heart bright and dims the moonlight.....delightful!

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  7. Donna MatthewsMay 3, 2019 at 10:34 AM

    I just learned about the Lai form during NAPOWRIMO - makes for sweet poems 💙

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  8. Frank HubenyMay 3, 2019 at 4:27 PM

    Nice last three lines of this lai.

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  9. rob kistnerMay 4, 2019 at 6:18 AM

    A lovely lai to lay by - wonderful Arcadia?

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  10. brudbergMay 4, 2019 at 11:05 AM

    Lovely really... one should capture those moments.

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  11. Arcadia MariaMay 6, 2019 at 6:47 PM

    Thank you everyone.

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