Poetry Writings
heartfelt verses, Arcadia Maria
Short, sad, and without much hope despite the light-hearted rhythm. You chose the words well.
Good description of all the suffering and fear that comes from the loss of a lover. Very nice.
A sad poem, I hope there is a good ending somewhere in the future.
Sad, but time passes and hope grows.
I have known this feeling... A well written poem.
Thank you everyone for reading and commenting.
I really like your title. Heartbreak is always a tough place to be.
heartfelt verses, Arcadia Maria
ReplyDeleteShort, sad, and without much hope despite the light-hearted rhythm. You chose the words well.
ReplyDeleteGood description of all the suffering and fear that comes from the loss of a lover. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteA sad poem, I hope there is a good ending somewhere in the future.
ReplyDeleteSad, but time passes and hope grows.
ReplyDeleteI have known this feeling... A well written poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone for reading and commenting.
ReplyDeleteI really like your title. Heartbreak is always a tough place to be.
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