Thursday, June 13, 2019

questions

will you mark
my heart with
your scent
imprint your kiss
upon my lips
will you push me
to the edge
without letting
me fall down
love me for
my perfections
and all my flaws
across blue seas
I look for your
answers patiently


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10 comments:

  1. lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comJune 13, 2019 at 6:40 PM

    Questions seeking answers....hoping for answers that are illustrative of love. Nicely done.

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  2. scotthastiepoetJune 14, 2019 at 5:58 AM

    Lovely tone to this - a little jewel of sentiment...

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  3. Laura BloomsburyJune 14, 2019 at 6:14 AM

    Love the neat compressed lines and the way the questions echo far over the sea waiting for the answers that have not yet come

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  4. Ken Gierke / rivrvlogrJune 14, 2019 at 11:10 AM

    Patiently, yes, but I can feel the anticipation in this. Well done.

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  5. indybevJune 14, 2019 at 11:52 AM

    In search of love …. Great write.

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  6. Arcadia MariaJune 14, 2019 at 11:12 PM

    Thank you everyone 🙂

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  7. Frank HubenyJune 15, 2019 at 12:01 PM

    I like the trust involved in letting someone push on to the edge.

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  8. brudbergJune 16, 2019 at 11:30 AM

    SO many relevant questions... alas so many questions like this will never be answered.

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  9. Arcadia MariaJune 16, 2019 at 1:19 PM

    Thank you Frank and brudberg

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  10. Sanaa RizviJune 19, 2019 at 3:45 PM

    This is incredibly romantic!!❤️

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