Poetry Writings
Lovely style with words to match. Thanks for sharing!
I think being pulled toward the depths is what makes us drown, but we can also learn to swim.
Neat, succint and strong Maria - we've all been there and it is overwhelming... Your piece captures this perfectly and with such economy too... Great!
This is so touching! It's strange how with the passage of time we see people differently and how our emotions change...
Your emotion is conveyed very well here.
What a beautiful tanka...I love this! We have to learn to discern whose eyes we should be looking into and getting swallowed up by!
Sounds kind of exciting!
This sounds like a nice experience to have unless I misread the poem.
Lovely style with words to match. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteI think being pulled toward the depths is what makes us drown, but we can also learn to swim.
ReplyDeleteNeat, succint and strong Maria - we've all been there and it is overwhelming... Your piece captures this perfectly and with such economy too... Great!
ReplyDeleteThis is so touching! It's strange how with the passage of time we see people differently and how our emotions change...
ReplyDeleteYour emotion is conveyed very well here.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful tanka...I love this! We have to learn to discern whose eyes we should be looking into and getting swallowed up by!
ReplyDeleteSounds kind of exciting!
ReplyDeleteThis sounds like a nice experience to have unless I misread the poem.
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