cut me loose
from this pier
let me float
into vast seas
let me drift
towards sunsets
without a care
or concern
let me be free
to be completely
me and not
worry about
what others say
for only I
know what
lies within
cut me loose...let me float...
ReplyDeleteYES. I can feel the freedom in this.
Great.
Good reason to seek freedom: "for only I
ReplyDeleteknow what
lies within"
The sea can feel like the ultimate freedom. The horizon is not a fence.
ReplyDeleteOh the freedom of water, possibly echoes from the womb!
ReplyDeleteI love the last three lines.
ReplyDeletedrift toward sunsets.... yes!
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone :)
ReplyDeleteLove this.....cut me loose....so simple, but so strong.
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