Tuesday, September 24, 2024

as the leaves fall

under skies
cobalt blue
the leaves fall

in hues of
orange, red
yellow, brown

and my heart
thinks of you 
that last kiss

now fading
away like
summer’s bliss


19 comments:

  1. A gentle poem with great use of colour and rhyme, Maria.

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  2. a reminder of what summer gave and we couldn't keep

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  3. Nice one Arcadia. Thanks for dropping by to read mine

    much♡love

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  4. Your poem is beautiful. 'that last kiss now fading away like
    summer’s bliss' ... took me back to last October remembering as the love of my life passed away. Sad yes, but I am left with the loveliest of memories.

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    1. Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad my poem inspired good memories for you.

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  5. Mmm... That kiss! This is lovely, Arcadia.

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  6. A wistful little poem, understated and simple, so right for the subject.

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  7. love and fall-- captured in your poem beautifully! xx

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  8. So gentle evoking memories of fall(ing) in love ☺️💕

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  9. yes.

    cobalt blue

    thinks of you

    lovely poem

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  10. So much gentle movement and tender images in this poem.

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